Friday, 11 March 2016

Super Sentences!

This week we have continued on our diary writing theme, linking it again with our drama unit about the Early Settlers voyage to New Zealand. Mrs Jackson has chosen the sentences this week that really capture the feelings and emotions on board.

Molly is crying up a sea of her own – Isaac

I feel sorry for the families, the babies are crying, the mums are trying to calm them down and the dads are yelling. It looks like a hard life to live. – Mya

One family brought a book and I listen to them while their mother reads it to her children. – William

I can taste the salty water that comes from the smashing waves. – Tessa


1 comment:

  1. I found Isaacs sentence really really cool with molly crying up a sea of her own when your on the sea.

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